Natalie’ Writing

06/18/2009

THE MOVE
”Ah!” said Mr. and Mrs. Marconi.
”Can we go now?” asked Maddie, Maggie, and Magenta. Matt was packing his suit case still.
He was 16 and just got his driving license. Maddie and Maggie were twins and they were 10. Magenta
was 12.

2 hours later …

1 more minute children…
Girls interrupt, ” Finally!”
…Look over there. Oh hooray, children it’s next to Aunt Sherri’s house!” Mom said.
” Oh no oh dear children, it’s a tornado, what oh what should we do?” she asked her husband
frightfully.
While everyone was panicking Matt in the other car was thinking, so he told them, ”I’m going to
drive over to Aunt Sherri’s house and Magenta since you are the oldest girl over there except for mom,
you are going to go up to Aunt Sherri’s front porch & ask her if we can come in until’ the storm ends.

And that’s exactly what she did. But Aunt Sherri didn’t know that they were moving into the house next door so she was confused at first. But all in all she said yes ,of course and they had such a good time & she made snacks, they had popcorn, watched movies,they spent the night and then the next day she helped them get moved in and settled. And you want to know what. Their house looked like a palace.

THE END

3 Responses to Natalie’ Writing

  1. Grampa Devine

    What a fine story – I loved the last line!

  2. this is so cool that my very own story is on walenga.wordpress.com
    so from me…
    Please post comments so not only i can so them but so that other people can see or at least see the number of how many people love my story

  3. Dear Natalie,
    You worked really hard on it. So, I think it’s good!

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